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My 2015 Motivation & Emotion Book Chapter: Stress and Achievement Motivation: What are the effects of stress on achievement motivation?

Moodle contributions:

 * 1) Hey Rebecca,  Your book chapter is an interesting read! I've just added the sub-heading 'overview' above your introduction.  I have some suggestions for you as well. Firstly, I think the structure would flow a bit better if you changed the order of your information. You could put the 'hot memory' part after the overview so that readers then have a definition of hot memory so the rest of the information will flow a bit better. You could follow on from that with 'cold memory' and then the 'areas of the brain involved with hot and cold memory'.  Other than that, your structuring and information looks great! http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=370289&parent=918487
 * 2) Hey Vanessa,  Your structure looks great so far! I was just wondering if you were going to have a look at the relationship between height and genetics, rather than just height disorders?  Also, another suggestion is that you could talk about the benefits of one's height? (i.e. tall people, could be great basketball players; shorter people, more agile?)  Looking forward to seeing your book chapter progress! http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=370287
 * 3) Hey Josh,  Your book chapter looks great!  I've just made some minor changes to your references section so that it complies with the APA referencing format. Other than that, great job and good luck! http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=370709&parent=919369

Wikiversity contributions:

 * 1) Hey, Your book chapter looks really great and informative. You should add a box for your multimedia which can be added with this code: {| | [Multimedia link goes here Go to a 3 min. audiovisual overview of this chapter.]  |} . I also like how you've placed photos throughout your information giving it a splash of colour throughout. --U3096825 (discuss • contribs) 12:32, 23 October 2015 (UTC) Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Group sport motivation
 * 2) Hey! Your book chapter is coming along nicely! I like all of the different definitions and links you have put throughout the book chapter. I would suggest talking about the achievement motivation theory. You can talk about the goal theory as a motivation for individuals to dance and succeed these goals also. I have also changed a few grammatical errors. Looks great so far though :)--U3096825 (discuss • contribs) 10:47, 25 October 2015 (UTC) Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Dance motivation
 * 3) Hey! Your chapter looks great so far! I like the use of colour throughout the book chapter which makes it easier to follow and read. I have also noticed that you have only used APA in-text referencing for the overview section, but not for anything else. Also, your images should also be in APA formatting, which just involves placing Figure # with the number of the image in place of the #. Good luck with the rest of it! :) --U3096825 (discuss • contribs) 10:55, 25 October 2015 (UTC) Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Affect intensity
 * 4) Hey! Your book chapter is very thorough and well-researched. I have just made some minor adjustments to your references section so that it complies with the APA referencing formatting style. Other than that, your book chapter looks great! Good luck!--U3096825 (discuss • contribs) 11:07, 25 October 2015 (UTC) Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/High-risk business motivation
 * 5) Hey! Your topic is very interesting! I've made a few minor adjustments to your headings so they comply with the wikiversity standards. I would suggest putting in some more links with your definitions to other pages such as emotion and some other related book chapters from previous years. Also, your references should also be APA formatting with a hanging indent rather than a numbered list which can be done with this code:  insert references here  Other than that, your information looks great and I like that you have defined a lot of the key words. Good luck! --U3096825 (discuss • contribs) 11:54, 25 October 2015 (UTC) Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Laughter and emotion
 * 6) I love how many definitions you have put in and all the links to other pages for more information! The use of colour throughout your chapter makes it flow and easy to read. I also liked how you had a quiz towards the beginning of the chapter to test our knowledge. I just had one concern which was when I did the first quiz, not realizing there was a second, it had already submitted answers for the second quiz, meaning I would have to reset the quiz in order to take it. Not sure if that happened just for me, but thought I would mention it. Looks great otherwise, great work! --U3096825 (discuss • contribs) 12:18, 25 October 2015 (UTC) Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Menstrual cycle and emotion
 * 7) Hey! Your links throughout the book chapter are great for getting further information. I've just made some adjustments to your headings as only the first word is supposed to be capitalized. I would just suggest putting some other links for other book chapters from the previous years? Your structure makes reading the information easy to follow. Other than that, great work! --U3096825 (discuss • contribs) 12:44, 25 October 2015 (UTC) Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Exercise and motivation