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My book chapter if you wish to provide feedback: https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Illegitimate_children_and_emotion

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 * Advised the writer to modify their headings under the images of their book chapter to the correct APA formattingTalk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Grief and health#Feedback
 * Suggested the author provide dates for the quotes provided, as well as insert correct APA formatting for images and relating the image of Nick Kygrios to the paragraph it's inserted into. Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Impulsive behaviour in children


 * Suggested the writer include a case study within their book chapter to demonstrate to the readers their understanding of the topic []


 * Suggested they provide case examples of each emotion, use different box colours and consider focusing specifically on two key theroies. https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Extreme_emotions_as_motivation


 * Suggested they consider enlarging their images for better clarity, elaborating on their dot points in regards to combating the issue and providing evidence, and including an opening case study. https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Stress_and_infertility


 * Advised the writer to include some colour and images, and elaborate on what well-being is. https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Empathy_and_emotional_well-being


 * Suggested they rearrange a section of the chapter to make it easier to read and flow better - images were all clustered together. https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Reading_motivation_in_young_learners


 * Suggested the writer include more colour for strucuture and engagement purposes, and consider adding more diagrams and images that further explain the concepts and theories. https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Zeigarnik_effect#Feedback


 * Provided a helpful link for statistics and current research for their topic https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Chocolate_eating_motivation


 * Provided a link for statistics and graphs on current research for their topic https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Caffeine_and_exercise_motivation


 * Provided a useful link for statistics and graphs on current research for their topic https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Internet_addiction_motivation#Feedback