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Studying a Bachelor of Science in Psychology at the University of Canberra.

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 Arlo Porter discussion forum feedback – Emotional Hijacking 

Minor edits and suggestions

At the top of your chapter it says a link to a 5 minute audiovisual overview and the multimedia overview is meant to be 3 minutes;

In the treatment part of your chapter if you need to make up some words there is a thing called the "6 second rule" with an emotional hijack you could perhaps look at?; and

Your 'see also' and 'references' are subheadings so you may want to make them actual headings.

 School Belonging motivation – Discussion feedback 

Sugesstions

One small suggestion I have is to create a different coloured dialogue box for your case study? I think this would just make the case study stand out a little bit more and it would be easier for them to find. The syntax for creating a different dialogue box is { { RoundBoxTop|theme=2 } } - To change the colour of the box just change the number after the word "theme" from 1-4 (just copy and paste the syntax and then delete the spaces between the brackets.

{ { RoundBoxBottom } } - Put this syntax right at the end of your case study

 Broaden-and-build theory of emotions – Discussion feedback 

Suggestions

You could probably talk about the strengths and limitations of the theory, practical applications, are there any specific emotions that the theory addresses and maybe you could use an example or case study of an application of the theory just so the reader can really get a good understanding of what the theory is a all about. I did a quick search on scholar and this appears to be a pretty good study with the theory's use: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3126102/#!po=0.561798 I hope this helps.

 Illicit drug taking at festivals 

Minor edits and added to the 'prevention and safe use' section

Prevention and safe use

Pill testing

http://www.nls-suchtgefahren.de/eu-projekt/texte/EnglPart1 [1].pdf http://s3.amazonaws.com/academia.edu.documents/41821313/Illicit_drugs_policy_through_the_lens_of20160131-6056-k2jrr7.pdf?AWSAccessKeyId=AKIAJ56TQJRTWSMTNPEA&Expires=1476752817&Signature=Hup6AJPaW8QNnzY2vMLwWaXfL2U%3D&response-content-disposition=inline%3B%20filename%3DIllicit_drugs_policy_through_the_lens_of.pd

Drug detection dogs

http://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s10071-010-0373-2/fulltext.html

Pros

- Can stop people from taking drugs to festivals in the first place - Can detect drugs on people if they are carrying them

- Can sniff and detect drugs that human police officers can't

Cons

- "Panic overdoses"

- Dogs can be injured while on duty

- People take drugs regardless

- Dogs aren't always accurate