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Motivation and emotion

My chapter

1. Re: RE emotional hijacking vs Impulsivity

 * 1) by Natalie Menezes - Wednesday, 28 September 2016, 4:42 PM Hi Arlo, Your topic sounds interesting and I came across an article that may or may not be relevant to your book chapter. I've included the citation below, hopefully it is of some help seeing as you mentioned that there was not a lot of research on your topic.   ·     Bast, F. (2015). Extraordinary tales: Parasites hijacking the minds of hosts. Resonance, 20(10), 893-902. doi:10.1007/s12045-015-0254-8  ·                                                                                          Natalie

2. Re: Please Post Chapter For Feedback :)

by Natalie Menezes - Thursday, 29 September 2016, 2:51 PM

Hi Dana,

I'm doing my chapter on

1  Restricted interests and anxiety in children with autistic spectrum disorders - What is the relationship between restricted interests and anxiety in children with ASD? - U901934

I'd really appreciate someone having a look over it. I can do the same for yours too, if you'd like that? So far I only have the overview done but I plan to get a lot of it on wikiversity early next week.

Regards,

Natalie

3. Re: Please Post Chapter For Feedback :)

by Natalie Menezes - Monday, 3 October 2016, 3:32 PM

Hi Dana,

I had a look at your page. You're off to a great start and your topic is really interesting. I edited a couple of your in text citations so that they meet APA criteria. I hope you don't mind me changing them directly....I though it might be easier than pointing them out to you.

Kind regards,

Natalie

4. Re: Book chapter quiz

by Natalie Menezes - Monday, 3 October 2016, 3:45 PM

Hi Natalie,

I think the number of quiz questions is based on personal preference. I say this because doing quizzes are also optional so there aren't any set requirements as far as I know. Looking at a couple of past book chapters that have used quizzes may also help.

Regards,

Natalie M

5. Re: Book Chapter Review

by Natalie Menezes - Tuesday, 4 October 2016, 2:59 PM

Hi Jono,

I had a read through your book chapter. It is very interesting. I'll read through it again when you include your in text citations, so just post again when you've done them. One suggestion, is that you break up the text with a table or point form somehow. I realise you said this was a very rough draft so if you already have this in mind, then just disregard my comments.

Regards,

Natalie

6. Re: Book Chapter Images

by Natalie Menezes - Tuesday, 4 October 2016, 9:41 PM

Hi Brendan,

I don't know the code but in the last tute James gave the following steps for inserting images.

1. search for the image in wikicommons

2. Highlight the file name of the photo you want, then copy

3. On your book chapter page, click where you want the picture top go

4. click insert, media

4. paste the file name of the photo

5. Fill in the caption section with the name of the photo e.g. Figure 1. .....

6. Click advanced settings (Position: right hand side, keep the thumbnail highlighted, then select the image size you want, approx. 200 is best)

I really hope you can follow this and you find it helpful. I wrote these notes down in the tute and was able to follow it when I got home.

Regards,

Natalie

7. Re: Please Post Chapter For Feedback :)

by Natalie Menezes - Thursday, 6 October 2016, 8:26 PM

Hi Kelly,

Thanks for your interest in my topic. I read your chapter a little while ago....what a good choice of topic! I added your chapter to my watch list and I also made a few corrections to some of your in-text citations. Also, I think when doing table headings that it should be Table 1. Blah, blah. The word table should be in italics....I think....I'll double check that though because I've done mine the other way around to yours. I'll keep watching your page and give feedback if you like?

Regards,

Natalie

8. Re: Social Contributions

by Natalie Menezes - Tuesday, 11 October 2016, 2:41 PM

Hi Caitlin,

I'm happy to have a look over your chapter sometime tonight and get back to you tomorrow. It sounds like an interesting topic. Also, if you've got the time I'd appreciate if you might have some suggestions for how to cut my word count down. I didn't realise that the reference list was included because every assignment I've done so far has not been like this. My topic is  motivation and emotion/book/2016/the role of restricted interests and anxiety in ASD

Kind regards,

Natalie M

9. Re: Social Contributions

by Natalie Menezes - Wednesday, 12 October 2016, 10:52 AM

HI Caitlin,

I read your chapter and it looks great. I've noticed you have received some feedback since yesterday and a couple of the points mentioned are things I came across myself. Rather than repeat them, what I can add is that you just double check all of your in text citations. I was actually going to suggest a couple that needed correcting but I noticed that when you used et al there were some commas and/or full stops missing. For example, I changed (Author et al. 2016) to (Author et al., 2016). I have corrected them for you, so I hope you don't mind. I think I adjusted all the ones that needed changing, but it can't hurt to double check them.

Kind regards,

Natalie

10. Changes to in text citations
 * 05:06, 17 October 2016 (diff | hist) . . (+8)‎ . .  m  Motivation and emotion/Book/2016/Chronic illness self-management motivation ‎ (edits to in-text citations) (current) (Tag: Visual edit)

11. Re: Please Post Chapter For Feedback :) by Natalie Menezes - Monday, 17 October 2016, 4:16 PM

Hi Jess,

I just read your chapter, it looks really good. I also made some changes to your in-text citations so that they comply with correct APA referencing. It might be worth double checking to see if they are all correct. Also if you add the following at the beginning of your reference list, using edit sourceat the end, it will add a hanging indent to your reference list.

Regards,

Natalie

12. Re: Book Chapter Images

by Kelly Mckean - Monday, 17 October 2016, 2:07 PM

Hi guys

Do images used have to be from wikicommons? I wasn't sure if I was able to use others found from other websites?

Thanks in advance

kelly

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Re: Book Chapter Images

by Natalie Menezes - Monday, 17 October 2016, 4:32 PM

Hi Kelly,

The images don't have to come from wikicommons. You just need to make sure that if it is not from wikicommons, you reference it appropriately and you have permission to use the image. Wikicommons was suggested because all of the images are suitable for use.

Regards,

Natalie

13. Re: Book chapter feedback

by Natalie Menezes - Thursday, 20 October 2016, 3:04 PM

Hi Kodi,

I just read your chapter and made some edits to your in text citations...seems to be my thing

Also, I saw this  (Cloninger, Zohar, 2011.)  but didn't want to change this one because I didn't know what you meant it to be......I think it should be  (Cloninger & Zohar, 2011)  though.

Otherwise your chapter looks really good. There is a nice balance of images, boxes and text.

Hope this helps,

Natalie

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14. Re: correct APA formatting

by Natalie Menezes - Saturday, 22 October 2016, 11:15 AM

Hi James,

I had a look through the APA referencing book I have but couldn't find an exact example like you have mentioned. However, (apoptosis; Tomlinson et al., 2012) looks familiar from journals I have read...I don't think your second example is correct. Have you considered reorganising your sentence? Just an option, for if you can't find the answer.......

As cell death (apoptosis) occurs in the neural pathways between the cortex and limbs (Tomlinson et al., 2012)

Sorry I couldn't be more help and answer your question with certainty.

Natalie

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15. Re: Have an extension but will still need feedback!!

by Natalie Menezes - Saturday, 22 October 2016, 2:35 PM

Hi Louise,

I'm sorry to hear about your circumstances. And I am happy to look over your chapter once you get going. Just post your link...I'll keep checking in.

Natalie

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16. Re: Have an extension but will still need feedback!!

by Natalie Menezes - Monday, 7 November 2016, 2:44 PM

Hi Louise,

I think your chapter looks really interesting. I made one change to an in-text reference but other than that everything looks great. I also noticed that for figure 1, you still need to use italics for this. Great chapter!

Natalie