User talk:1994BG

Hello,

I looked through your Hot memory page. Excellent choice of topic. I think you did really well, the format works well. and you made a fairly broad topic very manageable to read. I guess the only thought I have to offer is there's potential to link other useful pages at the end of your page. particularly if there are other PTSD pages that are available on wikiversity/ wikipedia. Also, the quiz could potentially fall before the conclusion to act as a summarising segway rather than an ending. Other that that, I think you've done really well.

-Dawn

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:47, 20 November 2015 (UTC)