User talk:Alex Edelsward

Hello Former Student!

I'm writing to you because you took a class from me in the past few years at the Art Institute. As of Spring, 2010, I'll not be teaching further classes at AIS for the foreseeable future. (We're parting ways on good terms!) Until now, you've been able to reach my Wikiversity educational resources from my website, but I've decided to delete that link. You can still reach all of those materials here.

If you're interested in what I'm up to in the future (which will include an album in 2010 and a novel in 2011) you can friend my facebook page or drop me an email at info@stevenarntson.info and you'll receive a periodic update about performances, classes, and publications.

If you know any current or former students of mine who might be interested in any of this, please forward this information if you have a moment.

I hope all is well for you.
 * Best! Stevenarntson

From Alex Lee--

I really like your Pangea story. I thought it was unique, and it reminded me of a book I read a long time ago. It sets up the scene quite well, and although there isn't really any character interaction I do feel that it has a nice amount of depth overall. I would love if you revisited this story to further explains the other effects of the virus (Are there mutations? If so, what kind?) just more overall detail and refinement would make it a more complete piece, but as a blurb or a starting point it is quite effective. You could also go into maybe a small story of one such event of upper tier people starting rumors, or more about the survivor. Who is he? Where did he come from? How is he surviving?