User talk:Becksjuergen/New formula for the circumference of the ellipse

Cleanup
Current content focuses on the author rather than the subject. Needs significant clean-up and a Learning by doing focus. -- Dave Braunschweig (discuss • contribs) 14:20, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Could you review this for validity. It's not my area of expertise, and I don't know whether it needs a label. -- Dave Braunschweig (discuss • contribs) 01:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Moving draft into userspace
Hello user:Becksjuergen! I moved your draft into userspace where you can further develop it. If you have any questions, leave a not in my talk ("discuss") page.Guy vandegrift (discuss • contribs) 02:26, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Hallo Guy vandegrift I have edited my draft again. What do you think about it now?--Becksjuergen (discuss • contribs) 18:04, 29 April 2020 (UTC)