User talk:D.Macdonald/style response

My response to your style piece

After reading through your piece "the note," as I may refer to it, it brought back a few memories of similar stories/concepts. Even thought the central theme may be different it made me recall a few notable media pieces such as: Farrenheit 451, Equilibrium, and 12 Monkeys. One thing that always bothered me about literature based on time travel is the fact that the past cannot be changed. Well, at least in theory it cannot, but how do we really know?

I suppose the main reason why I recalled these other media pieces is the fact that character that had written the note said he "found his way into the underground," which goes accordingly with similar societies in the other media. I did enjoy the fact that the author of the note is very underground, as haggard as he is, he is willing to take a chance at the age of 40, and change the past/present/future.

My main question to this piece...is there more? I am officially intrigued.

Anyways, to return to matters; Your character presents a second objective, which he deems as important as his primary. He is very willing to go back in time, with  a "currently" outdated weapon, as to not disrupt the past any further than is main objective.

After rereading the note, something snapped in my mind, "The Terminator!" Well that is, the terminator minus the human exterminating robots. I found it to be quite similar though, with Dominic and Damian being the "almost" human exterminators of 2040. All in all, this note has potential and hopefully there is more to come. I have always been a fan of these type of theme based works.