User talk:Daniel.josifovski/Australian Football:The Political Past and the Business Future

Copy editing
Hi Daniel, good job so far, sketching out the essay. I did some copy editing up until the section "Business Failures". You'll notice I've inserted quite a number of (REF) calls. You don't have to get them all, but try to get as many as you can. You are telling a very interesting story about the history of soccer in Australia, and the refs would kind ruin the flow, but they're needed for the claims to fact you're making. Given the sensitivity of the subject, you might need to pay extra attention to the references. Keep going. I'm enjoying watching the development. Leighblackall 09:07, 10 October 2011 (UTC)