User talk:Daniellak

Hello Former Student!

I'm writing to you because you took a class from me in the past few years at the Art Institute. As of Spring, 2010, I'll not be teaching further classes at AIS for the foreseeable future. (We're parting ways on good terms!) Until now, you've been able to reach my Wikiversity educational resources from my website, but I've decided to delete that link. You can still reach all of those materials here.

If you're interested in what I'm up to in the future (which will include an album in 2010 and a novel in 2011) you can friend my facebook page or drop me an email at info@stevenarntson.info and you'll receive a periodic update about performances, classes, and publications.

If you know any current or former students of mine who might be interested in any of this, please forward this information if you have a moment.

I hope all is well for you. Best! Stevenarntson

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Personal Essay
Please post your personal essay, and let me know with an email--I'll take a look at it and offer any suggestions I might have.
 * Best, Stevenarntson

Personal Essay Comments
This is a good start, but could use more development. It paints the picture of the problem briefly, but I'm more interested in the story behind everything--that is, the personal story here and your thoughts on the matter. I'd like to see your friend's experiences expanded, maybe through an interview, and some specific ideas from you about what you think about the larger situation. Additionally, please cite the source if you use statistics (for instance, about teens being more likely to abuse prescription drugs than illegal drugs).
 * Best, Stevenarntson

Further Comments
Good additions to this. I'd like to see some development of the idea of a solution to these problems--what can be done by people to overcome, or avoid, such problems, so the essay can round itself out on a positive note. Beyond that, go through and proof carefully, making sure that "your" and "you're" are straightened out, and misspells like "fianlly" get corrected. Good work.
 * Best, Stevenarntson