User talk:Jzest/ENES-100/Project 1

Never use the word "research" unless you are producing a "research" paper as if you were in english class ... narrative or report on week 1 belongs on project page, not CDIO page ... "Work Flow" means you are designing a production line or assembly line ... and you are describing who does what ... not what you are doing .. what you are building here is a tutorial ... not engineering implementation ... I see nothing but success here ... need details on the failure ... the stopping point .... do not use the word "research" when describing the next steps ... do not include the conceive, design and operate headers ... change this to tutorial ... excellent passive voice ... 10/10/30 --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 13:44, 25 February 2013 (UTC)

I can not tell what you are doing to the CDIO pages, link to the specific page you are editing.

10/0/10 ... --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 12:58, 11 March 2013 (UTC)

10/10/30 ... good start --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 01:46, 27 March 2013 (UTC)