User talk:Mgraves7452/ENES-100/Project 1

Narrative doesn't reflect you did for the team, just describes convincing the team to work on this project. It gives the impression you did no work at home over the weekend on the project.

CDIO page has three great links. Need a theory of operation describing the spoiler.

I am looking forward to details, what materials were considered, then discarded and why.

Why aren't their pictures of the half spheres you took or looked at and what were the considerations?

Need lot more typing and pictures.

10/0/10  --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 14:45, 26 February 2013 (UTC)

CDIO Pages .. no words "I", "We" or "my" ... I deleted two phrases on your CDIO page with these in them.

No pictures of yourself on the CDIO pages. Attracting attention to yourself at this point is not the objective. Need to be able to make other people look good.

Please leave the new LIPO batteries in the back room. Don't carry them around by the cables. I have ordered another charger, but need someone to work on charger tutorial first.

Otherwise perfect.

10/10/40 ...

Need a link to the AutoDesk drawing itself .. not just a jpg screen shot .. can not upload the autodesk file to wikimedia, have to put on a google drive and make public ... please link up ... otherwise nonone can leverage your work ...

all your CDIO pages need to be merged into one page for the end of the project, there is not enough distinction between them.

10/10/10 ... --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 21:07, 12 March 2013 (UTC)

10/10/30 ... good job --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 01:52, 29 March 2013 (UTC)