User talk:Neilp/enes100/project0/CDIO

10/10/10 ... the writing you did on the CDIO page was a report to me, everything on the CDIO page should be "we" ... but that is this next week ... excellent job --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 01:29, 11 February 2013 (UTC)

10/5/15 ... still have the "we" versus "I" versus "passive voice" problem .. this leads to transparency problems .. need pictures with words ... words are good --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 17:56, 18 February 2013 (UTC)