User talk:SCorcoran/ENES-100/project 1


 * Great narrative
 * Great link to shared CDIO page
 * Narrative describes "different ways to draw a vaccum" but I don't see a list with sketched ideas. I don't see an investigation into the butterfly valves available. I was hoping to see this on the CDIO page.

10/10/0 ... --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 20:51, 25 February 2013 (UTC)

10/5/0 ... what is a breaker? I don't see any mention of it on the CDIO page ... the CDIO page is very good but it looks like you did not contribute much to it. You added one time sensitive sentence that belonged either in the narrative, or in the the "Next Steps" section of the CDIO page.

10/10/0 ... nothing on the CDIO page --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 13:56, 12 March 2013 (UTC)

10/10/0 ... --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 13:08, 28 March 2013 (UTC)