User talk:Shadowjack/Game domain model

Formatting / Categorization
This page has a lot of content, but minimal formatting. This makes it difficult for students to find this page and to understand what they read. I would suggest categorizing this page and then providing formatting (perhaps into lessons?). As an example - Theory of Programming Languages is a course I made where the focus is on formatting and presentation. Good job making this page as long as it is! Azotochtli (discuss • contribs) 18:41, 9 February 2013 (UTC)

Disposition of this page
This page was already subject to some expressed concern. It was listed in a set of "economics crift" pages by a user, see. It was listed by another user as belonging in the "Incubator," i.e., as not ready for living in mainspace..

It is possible that this could go back into mainspace, but it would need to be placed in context to show utility as a learning resource. Generally, participant essays may be allowed either in user space (i.e., where I have moved this) or as student or participant work as part of an educational resource that is clearly such, in which case it would be a subpage, not in mainspace.

The page, as it is, is not developed or presented as an neutral educational resource. I believe there are other such pages. You may, at any time, look at what I have moved by reading my Move log. I am not an administrator here, I am only working for maximum inclusion, which requires that what others might think inappropriate for Wikiversity be placed in an acceptable context, and for the overall usability of Wikiversity for education. Thanks for understanding. --Abd (discuss • contribs) 17:13, 23 October 2013 (UTC)