User talk:Srokebep/ENES-100/project 1

Excellent ... the narrative should be shorter and say things like ... "I figured out the emitter, collector and base connections to the transistor" ... Need Next Steps section .. too much under "Problem Statement". You are working in "Implement" .. "Assembly of parts into larger constructs." I re-wrote your CDIO page to reflect this.

10/10/40 .. --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 21:28, 25 February 2013 (UTC)

Organization is sort of chaotic right now ... needs tight thread of a story connecting everything together, but all the pieces are there .. great job ... lots of work ... maybe give the job of organizing the CDIO pages to someone else

10/10/50 ... --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 15:56, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

10/10/50 .. don't double post the pictures in both the narrative and the CDIO page ... turn the CDIO page into a tutorial .. it reads like that anyway ... there is a time context to it ... --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 14:26, 12 March 2013 (UTC)

10/10/20 .... good job --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 13:30, 28 March 2013 (UTC)