User talk:Steven1108/ENES-100/project 1

Everything in your CDIO page belongs in the narrative. You are not writing in the passive voice all the time on your CDIO page. "My only idea", ... try to rephrase so don't use the word "You" ...

You can write in the first person on your project narrative page. Try to avoid opinions such as "look good" ... describe what "looks good" in detail.

Otherwise great!

No narrative ...

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10/10/20 .. great narrative .. good CDIO pages .. should have links to the youtube video that set your expectations and showed shrink wrap --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 21:17, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

10/10/10 ... please make one CDIO page of everything you did --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 21:44, 12 March 2013 (UTC)

10/10/30 ... very good .. it came together --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 13:41, 29 March 2013 (UTC)