User talk:TanTran

Please post your Week 6 Project Review today.
 * Best, Stevenarntson


 * Tan,

This seems like an excellent project. I appreciate your going some distance toward both creative and more analytical work. I note that you'll be including pictures with some of these, which is a great idea. It is a little tough to post pictures to Wikiversity--usually people use links instead. You might also consider posting those pieces to a blog where embedding photos is a little easier. We can talk about it more as the quarter progresses.
 * Good luck! Stevenarntson


 * Tan,

As per our discussion of formatting: I put a sample link at your "project" section so you can see how to link to a separate blog. Additionally, when formatting an entry for the wiki, don't use indentations for paragraphs--just insert a blank line between. I did this for some of your short story, so you can see how it looks.

Let meknow if you have other questions!
 * Best, Stevenarntson


 * Tan,

I finished reading the story. I enjoyed it, especially the lavish detail you use to paint the scene. I agree with something I think you said--that the end seems a bit rushed. I'd like to have a slightly more visual ending, in which I can clearly see both of them together--older, wiser, and perhaps still fairly happy.
 * Best, steve

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