User talk:Tknbeez/ENES-100/project 1

I see pictures of what you took home. But I don't see this process described in the narrative.

I don't see lists and names of the objects so we can talk about them. I don't see diagrams showing how they are connected. I don't see you leveraging the previous teams (wind tunnel) documentation.

I am worried about safety. If you do manage to power it up, the propeller will take off and cut someone badly. It was safe before you took it apart.

Your CDIO page has been simplified.

10/10/10 --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 15:09, 26 February 2013 (UTC)

0/0/0 ... nothing to grade --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 20:36, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

Do not write in the first person (using I) in your CDIO pages. Please re-write in the passive voice. Please combine the CDIO pages into one page.

10/10/60 ... --1sfoerster (discuss • contribs) 21:13, 12 March 2013 (UTC)

10/10/20 ... good re-write, was missing some of the stuff like burning up the zagi 5 ESC ... look at how I re-wrote it.