User talk:U3025472/BPS2011 Essay

Interesting topic for sure, although I started thinking it was better suited to the unit Industrial Relations in Sport. I think this topic could be made to fit BPS, you'll just need to make sure you are talking about how business the business and politics of this topic, play out on a local to international scale. At the moment, you seem to be focused on a particular code, at a state or national level, so not covering the local community game, or the international aspect of the code. See if you can structure your essay around all this. Leighblackall 10:29, 14 September 2011 (UTC)