User talk:WillSackett/The Role of Sport for Government

Hi Will, this is a good selection of topics. I edited your outline simply to suggest a slightly different structure. I moved your second paragraph to be the last, just to close off the outline, and focus on the 2 topics you are using: Crawford and FIFA. Through these is should be possible to cover business and politics from a local to international scale, but you might need to constantly remind yourself, and resist the temptation to focus only on the national scale. Leighblackall 23:11, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

Will I like the topic too. Remember to consider the Government's response to Crawford (Pathways). I am keen to discuss this. Postillion 23:41, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Leigh, it looks better now that things have been switched around a bit, will keep that in mind. Thanks Keith, I will have to have a look at the response from the government. I am not sure whether I should focus solely on Crawford or include the World Cup bid as well? WillSackett 22:14, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Will, I like the way this is developing. I would stick with Crawford and the Government's response. If you need more information try http://keithlyons.me/?s=Crawford+Report&submit=Search Postillion 05:55, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

Will, I have worked through your essay as if it was in Word. I have made some edit suggestions. I look forward to discussing this with you. Postillion 10:48, 1 November 2011 (UTC)