User talk:Yuchristine

I like your overall explanation of the problem. It would also be better if there were some pictures involved so that it would be easy to know what the problem looks and like and it would be easier to follow along. Also, If you could discuss the basic definitions involved in the beginning of your paragraph, that would be easier to relate to your problem better. Like the definition of what probability is and other basic definitions students who have never taken this class would need to know in order to figure out this problem

-Suzie Moon Smoo1244 04:14, 27 October 2010 (UTC)

You definitely did a good job explaining why you need to do the formula for the problem. Maybe what you could do is write out the formula and how you solved it all with the math and algebra out underneath. Or like suggested above, include a picture. But we definitely need to see all the work that is done to finish this problem to understand how you got your final answer, not just skipping there, but all the intermediate steps too.

-Allison Chapello

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I shifted that content to your user page User:Yuchristine. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:50, 6 November 2010 (UTC)